tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post9217440865789578829..comments2023-10-30T07:01:17.084-07:00Comments on Monyoku: Story of Song - Bukan Salahku dan Juga Bukan SalahmuMonyokuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05056831646157792433noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-60465433933235722742016-08-29T04:17:11.599-07:002016-08-29T04:17:11.599-07:00Hati hati tenggelam kalo gituHati hati tenggelam kalo gituMonyokuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05056831646157792433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-50239120353493712122016-08-29T04:07:49.704-07:002016-08-29T04:07:49.704-07:00Iya, salahnya siapa hahaIya, salahnya siapa hahaMonyokuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05056831646157792433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-15448536746781816812016-08-29T04:07:24.707-07:002016-08-29T04:07:24.707-07:00Iya biar kamu nangis minta balon Iya biar kamu nangis minta balon Monyokuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05056831646157792433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-278807042250473272016-08-29T04:06:54.799-07:002016-08-29T04:06:54.799-07:00Iya lagi suka yang baper baper niIya lagi suka yang baper baper niMonyokuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05056831646157792433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-10788254857476446342016-08-29T04:06:34.527-07:002016-08-29T04:06:34.527-07:00Sedalam sumur diladanng ya mas heheSedalam sumur diladanng ya mas heheMonyokuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05056831646157792433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-15267641863103815912016-08-29T04:05:50.974-07:002016-08-29T04:05:50.974-07:00Dilanjut ya kalau menarikDilanjut ya kalau menarikMonyokuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05056831646157792433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-28935455932972490532016-08-29T04:05:27.379-07:002016-08-29T04:05:27.379-07:00Terimakasig Azi, selanjutnya saya coba sarannya. S...Terimakasig Azi, selanjutnya saya coba sarannya. Saya sendiri terfikir untuk memisahkannya tetapi masih ragu karena formatnya yang belum saya pahami. Monyokuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05056831646157792433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-16657407817819723492016-08-29T00:36:44.607-07:002016-08-29T00:36:44.607-07:00Memang bukan salah ku dan salah mu... tp salahnya,...Memang bukan salah ku dan salah mu... tp salahnya, wkwkwkLebah Kecilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12971517417638907463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-40060890488648318022016-08-01T06:48:19.094-07:002016-08-01T06:48:19.094-07:00bikin baper gan :3bikin baper gan :3Fery Nisarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17447981474386147813noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-2712407525230378022016-08-01T03:06:06.240-07:002016-08-01T03:06:06.240-07:00ceritanya baper banget yahceritanya baper banget yahAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05694777240679842580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-65122433138130583782016-08-01T02:32:39.148-07:002016-08-01T02:32:39.148-07:00mayan dalem nih crita :Dmayan dalem nih crita :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10317488412696383260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-12628731478600035322016-08-01T02:32:03.026-07:002016-08-01T02:32:03.026-07:00mayan dalem nih crita :Dmayan dalem nih crita :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10317488412696383260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-47827162031721984742016-08-01T00:54:24.948-07:002016-08-01T00:54:24.948-07:00Menarik gan ceritanya Menarik gan ceritanya baskorohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13458585818249466703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4227059679194215910.post-49660968386976294802016-07-31T23:31:50.841-07:002016-07-31T23:31:50.841-07:00Mau sedikit memberikan koreksi ya bos, saya kira l...Mau sedikit memberikan koreksi ya bos, saya kira lebih baik untuk memisahkan paragraf antara percakapan dan narasi.<br />overall, ceritanya cukup bagus, pemilihan kata cukup menarik, dan enak dibaca. Mantap!Azi Satriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03056531736634142277noreply@blogger.com